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cut again
Contributed by
hardcoreputa
on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
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i remember the razors first kiss,
6th grade was the beggining of this.
so much pain etched into a scar,
but the hurt never traveled too far.
i still deal with what happened then,
still want to cut again.
the blade slicing across the skin,
outward expression of the pain within.
but now i dont cut, i write,
but the pain stays dispite.
i dont know how to make it go away,
i use all my enegry just getting through today.
i have a fantasy in my head,
basically i wish i was dead.
i tried for so many years,
that im afraid even death wont dry my tears.
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Re: cut again
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by TypenLutschen on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 10:44:43 PM AEST
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| I completely relate! I KNOW how it feels. A good write. I hope you continue to vent like this. I like having things to read that I've felt before |
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Re: cut again
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 01:01:21 AM AEST
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I know pain, that I can relate to, Havent cut myself, but I nkow where u r coming from,
Writing is a good way to vent.
And your writing is an excellent start.
Bravo on a good read. |
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Re: cut again
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 01:02:20 AM AEST
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I know pain, that I can relate to, Havent cut myself, but I know where you are coming from,
Writing is a good way to vent.
And your writing is an excellent start.
Bravo on a good read, look forward to more. |
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Re: cut again
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by BlackFire9786 on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 01:50:05 AM AEST
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I know what you're feeling....I have cut myself as well, and know the pain you speak of! Great poem! Lots of Love
Lisa |
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Re: cut again
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 12:51:45 PM AEST
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I know the feelings...I know the need.
I'm sorry. But if you keep writing poetry like this....it will help. That's what I do.
Good writing too...
Hiddendarkness1705 |
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Re: cut again
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 02:57:39 PM AEST
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i feel there's a lot of truth in this, i've cut too although not for a while. This touched me:
but now i dont cut, i write,
but the pain stays dispite.
i dont know how to make it go away,
i use all my enegry just getting through today.
this is a really good poem.
x_x_x |
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Re: cut again
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by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 04:12:05 PM AEST
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| please read my poem called 'my pretty little jar' and tell me wat its about... x |
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