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The Destiny Angel
Contributed by
TheWildBeliever
on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 12:25:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Looking up at the stars above,
I found what no man could bear;
'Twas a dove with wings that glowed like the sun
And our eyes did they meet and doth stare.
Its feathers rustled like wind through hair
Or the foliage of trees that surround me
Its beak, with the shape of perfection
Opened, and opened my eyes to see.
It spoke to me in a voice so calm,
It soothed the troubles in my mind
"Your road has no end, with turns a plenty,
this, you will surely find."
It told me "don't cry,
your fate is of God's."
With a reassuring and glimmering smile.
I begged for the truth
"Is this my true calling?"
But had left me, in just a short while...
Copyright ©
TheWildBeliever
... [
2010-09-27 00:25:54]
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Re: The Destiny Angel
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by chrisdavid on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 12:44:12 AM AEST
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I like this a lot. Excellent description. Well done.
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: The Destiny Angel
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by JRLatin77 on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 03:50:05 AM AEST
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| Enjoyed your poem Chris, well done. |
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Re: The Destiny Angel
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by samueloliverrr on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 06:49:21 AM AEST
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| i love the way you write. great job! |
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Re: The Destiny Angel
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 04:05:20 PM AEST
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| Interesting poem with some nice imagery. |
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Re: The Destiny Angel
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 07:20:14 PM AEST
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good flow
well done |
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