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Journey To The Horizon
Contributed by
ofi93
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Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 07:43:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The moon is out
Tragedies come about
There will be another tomorrow
Life has abundant sorrow
Yet it always goes on
Keep those who are fond
In the end you will not be alone
You'll see how much you've grown
Physically, mentally, emotionally
You've let go of the deceitful strongly
Things fall apart so better can be put together
Just float away like a feather
Keep going in the direction of the sun; East
Climb the hill to the heavenly feast
The has risen
Today is the new horizon
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Re: Journey To The Horizon
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by evah2121 on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 08:41:23 PM AEST
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| Very great write. It's inspirational and quite relaxing :) Hope to see more of your writing. |
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Re: Journey To The Horizon
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by dypsomaniac on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 09:27:40 PM AEST
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| i read the tag on this and since i'm wide awake but still have to get up for work in five hours i figured this might be a good read......and it was great |
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Re: Journey To The Horizon
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by shelby on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 10:38:58 PM AEST
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Peace is the feeling that came to me while reading, something my heart and soul needed at this moment. Good work!
Michelle |
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Re: Journey To The Horizon
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by samueloliverrr on
Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 06:02:21 AM AEST
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| awesome possum, love it! |
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