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Too late
Contributed by
Bexstasy
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Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 05:17:45 AM in AEST
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Why couldn't you leave the past as it was?
Why try to change it now?
Did you really think I'd grant you that kiss?
Did you think it's what I'd allow?
I don't think I even want you in my life,
Your presence makes everything hard,
And I can't just trust you after all this time,
I can't just let down my guard,
I never forgot all your broken promises,
Or the times you made me cry,
I remember the web of lies you spun and,
The cruel words that stained like dye,
Your ways were always cheap and selfish,
And you never seemed to care,
You say now that you always loved me,
But it's far too late to repair,
You made mistakes again and again,
Until I became so numb,
Now I can't look you in the eyes,
And I hate what you've become,
So, no, we can't go back to what we were,
Or spend our time as one,
Maybe you thought I'd still be here,
But it's too late, I'm already gone.
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Bexstasy
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2010-09-29 05:17:45]
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Re: Too late
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by chrisdavid on
Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 11:11:51 AM AEST
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Excellent. Great flow to this one. And, yes, certainly sounds like the right decision. 'A web of lies', 'cheap and selfish', you're right to tell him no way back.
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Re: Too late
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by FadedHope on
Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 06:28:17 PM AEST
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| Well written |
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Re: Too late
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by jamesatteb on
Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 03:02:36 PM AEST
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so true!! i have been through this very recently with an ex i caught cheating!
and the similarities continue lol
i have a poem with the same title only slightly different circumstance!
LOVE YOUR WORK !! :) :D |
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