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Please Don't...
Contributed by
pinkunicornoctober
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Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 08:44:53 AM in AEST
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Please don't tell me,
How much you care,
Don't make me feel,
I have to be there,
Please don't look at me,
Like I"m all you'll ever need,
Don't steal my heart and soul,
Or put your trust in me.
Please don't call my house,
Just to hear my voice,
Don't make me surrender to you,
And lose all other choice.
Please don't talk about me,
Or get mad when I'm with him,
Don't take up for me ever again.
Please don't look at me,
With those big brown eyes,
Don't make me lose,
And give up my disguise.
Please don't tell our friends,
That you're in-love with me,
Don't tell yourself over again,
That we are meant to be.
Please don't walk by me,
Or look me in the eye,
Just stay away from me,
And let our feelings die...
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Re: Please Don't...
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by chrisdavid on
Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 11:18:52 AM AEST
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From reading this, it sounds as if there's a part of you that wants this guy. You use a lot of the word 'please'. Almost begging him to stop loving you because you feel weak in that you'll let him back in.
Very enjoyable, take care.
Chris. |
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Re: Please Don't...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 12:04:50 PM AEST
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| i absolutely love this... o.o |
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Re: Please Don't...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 01:00:34 PM AEST
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I find myself agreeing with Chris.
It would, probably be a good thing if he would let you go, however, love does choose us. It will at times find us whether we want it to or not. It is highly probable he will never stop loving you. In him, it may someday find a place to hide in the back of his mind and he will be able to control it well enough to grant your pleas. Honestly, he should do that if he really cares about you I just believe love is very hard to kill or "stop".
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: Please Don't...
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by FadedHope on
Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 09:13:46 PM AEST
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very nice
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Re: Please Don't...
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by Magg on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 02:43:32 PM AEST
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| Hmm...It really is something to think about. |
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Re: Please Don't...
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 19th October 2010 @ 03:21:20 AM AEST
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| Killing love is hard. Give him some time. He will push it down eventually. This coming from a guy who's girlfriend broke it off after 2.5 years. Love is like crack, and you have withdrawals and everything. |
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