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Suffocate
Contributed by
Gilgamec
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Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 02:05:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Clouds with blossom colors fill up my mind. Fog the air around me while i am at the deeps of wonderous sleep. I hibernate in the depths of wonder and magic, a beautiful scenario i see. I just miss someone to share it with. I grief in this captivating realm. Filled up with bliss and solitude. WAKE ME UP!
Note*: It's not quite a poetry, but i want to share it.
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Re: Suffocate
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by nrazak1 on
Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 05:20:43 PM AEST
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I don't quite agree with you. It IS poetry. Poetry is speaking your heart. Whether it makes sense to other or not. It think it's beautiful.
-Naadiya |
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Re: Suffocate
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by NewGuy on
Thursday, 7th October 2010 @ 08:34:43 PM AEST
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| short but sweet. can really tell it comes from the heart and thats what makes it poetic nice job |
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