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Feelings after a break up.....
Contributed by
girlbballjunky101
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Monday, 4th October 2010 @ 07:13:16 AM in AEST
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I wrote my name in the clouds,
But the wind blew it away.
I wrote your name in the sand,
But the water washed it away.
I wrote your name in my heart,
And forever it will stay.
Until the day came,
And you ripped it away.
That day went not so good,
I wanted it to end.
You broke my heart,
But Im the one to blame
Afraid that I was going to lose you,
But that came true.
I dont want you to leave,
But you wanted to
My heart is trying to heal,
But it cant on its own,
Because I need you to fix it.
I miss your gentle touch,
And your soft kiss,
Your smile can make me smile.
And your voice is so soothing,
Not hearing it makes me go crazy.
Just you all together,
There is no line of words.
That can explain how I feel about you.
Sometimes the moments feel right,
And want them to last forever.
The way I look at you has changed
You broke my heart once
Then you did it again.
I cant trust certain people now.
Because of you..
Not wanting you to leave,
But Im moving on but very slowly.
I have to hide the fact that I love you
From so many different people
But I cant handle not telling you.
I look at you different
But I love you the same
Sadly but true
And I cant be without you.
My heart skips a beat.
When I feel you against me.
When youre in my arms
I want to hold you much longer.
Wanting to tell you
How I feel.
But finding it hard to breathe
Around you.
You take my breath away when Im around you
You sweep me right off my feet.
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Re: Feelings after a break up.....
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by chrisdavid on
Monday, 4th October 2010 @ 08:37:22 AM AEST
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Interesting write. You still have feelings for this guy and yet you write: You broke my heart once, then you did it again. How did he break your heart? Through cheating on you? If so, I think you're better off without him.
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: Feelings after a break up.....
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by tinybitinsane on
Monday, 4th October 2010 @ 10:27:50 PM AEST
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i understand :/ keep ya head up i love this post
*tiny* |
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Re: Feelings after a break up.....
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 19th October 2010 @ 03:17:30 AM AEST
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| lost love hurts. Just try to be strong. Keep your head high, and have fun. And write poems :) |
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Re: Feelings after a break up.....
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 03:00:12 AM AEST
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| There is no pain like a broken heart, but it will heal faster if you leave him out of your life. I am doing the same with my ex right now, and every time I talk to her, it brings back old feelings. I tried everything, and have no regrets, and it is best just to move on. |
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