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Something's Wrong
Contributed by
hoping_to_be_me
on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Something's Wrong
when you're keeping it all inside
but you think of him when you awake
Something's Wrong
when your tears are silent
and it hurts just to look at him
Something's Wrong
when your mind aches
from thinking about what you'll never have with him
Somethin's Wrong
when you're running from feelings
and you don't know how to love him
But something's even more wrong
when I know
that this 'you'
is me
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2003-04-20 03:05:00]
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Re: Something's Wrong
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 01:00:32 PM AEST
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nothings wrong with you hoping_to...everyone goes through this one time or another...keep your head up :O) keep on keepin on... (good write)
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Re: Something's Wrong
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 03:05:39 PM AEST
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ohh this was a painful read, as i'm sure it was a painful write.
my heart goes to you! wonderful write. use that raw emotion, and write it out. makes for a good release, and even greater poetry.
- Bethani - |
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