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Lonely
Contributed by
Crimsonflame
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Saturday, 9th October 2010 @ 10:43:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A lonely heart,
Bleeding with sorrow,
Covered in scrapes and cuts,
Spiraling down a dark burrow,
Teardrops on my diary letters,
Pillows drenched by these pearls of pain,
Falling in spatters,
In torrents like a rain.
People hear, but no comfort fills me,
Loneliness is a choice I did not choose,
My heart is open, but joy eludes me,
Leaving me cold and bruised.
A fleeting pain that will pass,
That is what I pray it to be,
An emptiness that is bottomless and vast,
Deep in the plumbs of my body
It will pass,
The fact I have turned hard on the inside,
It will pass,
Once I say goodbye to my pride
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Crimsonflame
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Re: Lonely
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by emystar on
Sunday, 10th October 2010 @ 01:26:35 AM AEST
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Another sad but good write.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Lonely
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 10th October 2010 @ 08:35:30 AM AEST
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I agree with Emy, a sad write, but a good rhyme to it, well done thank you for posting.
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Re: Lonely
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by chrisdavid on
Sunday, 10th October 2010 @ 12:59:52 PM AEST
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I'm disappointed to hear you're so down. What makes you feel this way?
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Re: Lonely
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by 2bpositive on
Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 10:46:52 AM AEST
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I feel your pain
And although it came
It shall go
sooner than you know
And in its place
will there be joy in a while
and you my dear
once again shall smile.
You are never alone!
Thumbs up to you
for the courage to endure
lifes challenges
have you known for sure. |
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