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Whatever Happens
Contributed by
Hooligan785
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Saturday, 9th October 2010 @ 11:44:00 PM in AEST
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Whatever happens in my life of sin
Just know that I tried to win
I see that golden door, I'm knockin hard,
but they won't let me in
My life's in fast forward
sometimes I lose my mind and then..
I end up right back where i started broken-hearted
and still struggelin
I came from down and out
searching for a better way
Society seems to always lock me out
and tell me that i just need to pray
So if I lose my life
while in the process of finding me
keep searching for that light
even when your too blind to see
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Hooligan785
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2010-10-09 23:44:00]
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Re: Whatever Happens
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by emystar on
Sunday, 10th October 2010 @ 01:12:44 AM AEST
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Society sucks.
Keep your faith with God and you'll make it.
Blessings,
emy
Good writing. |
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Re: Whatever Happens
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by RowenM on
Sunday, 10th October 2010 @ 06:55:05 AM AEST
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Whatever Happens...Let it.
;)
Fantastic piece of writing! |
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Re: Whatever Happens
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by Z-DAWG on
Monday, 11th October 2010 @ 02:45:05 AM AEST
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| love it, i can totaly relate to that, expesualy the life of sin, iv tried hard to get rid of that |
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Re: Whatever Happens
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 18th October 2010 @ 09:49:55 PM AEST
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I can relate to this flow
Hang on
the carousel spins round and round |
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