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Redemption
Contributed by
UrbanLoveStory
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Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 05:46:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Smile because tomorrows another day,
And everyone must fall to rise again,
We never saw eye to eye about so many things,
Now we fall from grace on our broken wings,
The things we did that made me feel blue,
I'd do them all again just to fall with you,
I tried to become the best that I could be,
But the weight of my sins it burdened me,
You took my hand on a long October night,
Opened my eyes, became my guiding light,
You saw inside of me a beauty I never knew,
I realised that sadness was just a point of view,
Three words that never meant enough, I love you,
I must try to find within, my own redemption,
Releasing feelings once hidden from my heart,
I couldn't hide that loving you was my intention,
Realising redemption wont be mine while we're apart,
Looking in your eyes I can see a new path to take,
I've never known before how it felt to be so awake,
To hear wind in your hair, the ground under your feet,
To love I surrender my heart, into your arms I retreat,
Once more to walk in the presence of my salvation,
Permitting ourselves to bathe in mutual adoration,
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Re: Redemption
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by UNORTHODOX on
Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 11:20:31 AM AEST
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I am truely inspired after
reading this passage,there is no doubt
that what ever triggered these
lines was beautiful,depth and wisdom
certainly are fortified and present here,
well written!
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: Redemption
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by potentialpoet96 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 05:30:36 PM AEST
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i love this.
as i see, you arent a very religious person, and that's ok. but seeing someone like yourself- non-religious, write somethingh that shows such .. passion (for lack of a better word), is beautiful. i myself, am a very religious person.. so it was just touching to see this. i hope you write more, because i loved this one, alot. |
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Re: Redemption
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 09:15:43 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Great writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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