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ANTICIPATED GRIEVING.
Contributed by
andrewjones12
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Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 11:38:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Looking.
Waiting.
Wishing.
Hoping.
Asking.
Finding.
Receiving.
Seeing.
Then losing......
Thinking.
Contemplating.
Missing whats
Not worth redeeming.
The hard part is
Forgetting.
What you saw coming
And
leaving..
Copyright ©
andrewjones12
... [
2010-10-12 11:38:55]
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Re: ANTICIPATED GRIEVING.
(User Rating: 1 )
by quadira on
Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 03:39:51 PM AEST
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| I love this. so simple and heart felt with an ending thats full of meaning. A thought provoking write. Well done |
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Re: ANTICIPATED GRIEVING.
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 14th October 2010 @ 06:25:34 AM AEST
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It is a simple write but it says a lot at the
same time and has a good flow to. So
many writers including myself forget that
less is often better because the words
don’t over power the thoughts.
~Steve~
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