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You're Not In My Mind
Contributed by
insane_outsider
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Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 03:44:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Let Me Take You To My Secret Place Where Clearly Focused Is Your Face
Deep Within My Broken Mind You Are The One I'll Never Find
I Had You Once That Much Is True I Chose My Path Now I've Lost You
Waiting With Patients For You To Return It's Obvious Now It's My Time To Burn
This Isn't Over It Wont Stop There I'll Hurt Myself To Make It Fair
Come Back To Me And Heal My Heart Let's Try Again From The Start
From Start To Finish It's A Mad Race Then I Realize I'm Stuck In My Secret Place
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Re: You're Not In My Mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Anbarean on
Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 10:35:40 PM AEST (User
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I love the way you express to start from the start. Whish we could erase our past and can go back... |
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Re: You're Not In My Mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by RowenM on
Wednesday, 13th October 2010 @ 05:31:37 PM AEST (User
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Great Writing. Relating to that isn't actually hard. Props to the title, it hooked me up just be reading it! ;) |
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Re: You're Not In My Mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by girlbballjunky101 on
Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 07:12:28 AM AEST (User
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that poem i can tottaly relate to. its amazing |
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