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dark margins
Contributed by
ming
on
Thursday, 14th October 2010 @ 01:21:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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the weaves
frayed edge
unravels
climb my ribs
black hole
my heart
shhhreded
threads
ripple
past the edge
of language
pattern blurs
and story
floats
free.
Copyright ©
ming
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2010-10-14 13:21:36]
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Re: dark margins
(User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 16th October 2010 @ 02:09:58 AM AEST
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| Very nice. It is highly readable and all in all you've done a really good job with this. |
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Re: dark margins
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th October 2010 @ 07:04:31 PM AEST
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It's a very nice poem, written well in an engaging style. I like it.
Cheers,
Mickey. |
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