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Something’s Wrong With ME?
Contributed by
Rose
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Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
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What is wrong with me?
I seemly see no light, just the daily hum
Work, and work, all it is to be?
Just taking it day by day, hard life, taking it easy some
Im passed over all the time, except for something would be wrong
I am really trying to accept what path God can decide
Doing all the right things, but somewhere lost my inner song
Lost, few things take me away to seek or hide
Just existing in the days, wondering where that light is
Yes, I am thankful for life and material things
Perhaps time to be given, to think, a grateful child of HIS
Just wondering if this prayer I ask, a soul mate HE brings
Loneliness is painful, despite friends, and family there
It is not enough, despair in this prayer I ask
Tis beginning to think, if near forty, alone is seemly bare
Must be somewhere an answer, or maybe a too huge a task
I ask to pray for someone to be in my life, happiness for each of us
Nothing special, just a good decent fellow
Where we could share the challenges of time; sometimes a fuss!
The loneliness is taking away the light, the heart less mellow
Please, I am praying so, not looking, just praying
Do not pass me up God, how much longer will it be?
I long to share company for a long life of a mate staying
I try to keep bright as long as I can
Just wishing someone close, you can send my way
I just wish there were that special man
That would like me too, and would like to stay
Amber Rose Yeager April 19, 2003
I am just lonely. I have not found anyone who wants to date me, unless they want to go to bed first. I am an ole fashioned type gal. I believe in substance, getting to know someone first. So many men out there that lie, cheat, and will go a long ways to get what they want and then hurt you more. I will hang on to my morals and values, just that it is very lonely here. It is why I have not written much. I just wish there was someone close in my local area, so far, I am too young, and or I am too old!!! Yeah, I am in the middle, and well, sticking to my beliefs. I guess God will make it a long time before he will answer my prayer.
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Rose
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Re: Something’s Wrong With ME?
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 08:57:55 AM AEST
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Its a really good write, and I hope you find your special mate soon, he's out there somewhere. I wish you all the best, and keep writing from the heart.
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Re: Something’s Wrong With ME?
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 01:39:08 PM AEST
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best advice i can give you rose is...you'll find love the last place you look... and im not talking romantic love only...i found the best love i could find...right here on ypdc...i found the love of people lonely like me, who just needed an ear or some inspiration or just company on a long lonely sleepless night... so rose, if you ever EVER need a friend, i am here every night, all day...i am here... my e-mail is ILuvSk8rdudez@aol.com write anytime you need a friend... good luck finding what your looking for ms rose...beautiful poem and you have friends who care here at ypdc.
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Re: Something’s Wrong With ME?
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by Rose on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 10:28:43 AM AEST
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| Thank You for your understanding comments. I just felt compelled to write, only because it does help me heal and get it out of my system. I know Im not the only one that feels this way, I just wanted it out. For now, its all I can feel and write about, so I don't write alot. Im an ole fashioned gal with strong beliefs in morals and for some reason many males have this thing that after a month or three dates, its time to go to bed. Heck, Im still trying to find out,if they are real, that they are who they say they are, real friends, family, not living with someone, married, I have to investigate whom I wish to be with anymore. IT costs money, but well worth it. Also helps to do this, for some reason, You just want to wait and see if they tell the truth about themselves. You never know who you are going to be with anymore. Just I beleive in substance, sex is nothing, substance goes a long ways. tough finding a mature male, in his mid forties and up with a back bone, and not a jerk and out to impress. Just tough finding someone who has the old ways of morals and beliefs. Not easy and not many in my local area. just wanted to vent, not easy living alone all these years. Thanks for your support and in time, God will answer my prayers, for he has already answered many of mine before. it just takes time, and making sure, the man is really truly special and real, no lies. |
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Re: Something’s Wrong With ME?
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by fluffy on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 09:40:12 AM AEST
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| very good, dont worry things will work out with you, you still have along future, And i really like this poem |
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Re: Something’s Wrong With ME?
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 10:36:26 AM AEST
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Amber,
I can tell you there's nowt wrong with you! You just see things in a little more detail than most, like myself. And I know for a fact that peolpe like this throughout history, just don't seem to be happy with the way things are purely because they can see how things could and should be different for the good, but it's just too huge of a job to get everyone on this planet to realise what we and others like us do!
Lovely write by the way, tinged with the lonelyness of your life quest so far, which will be complete before we all go, believe!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Something’s Wrong With ME?
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by emystar on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:37:27 PM AEST
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Wow girlfriend,
This is sad but something many can relate too.
Luv, huggs, when u least expect it,
emy |
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