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Summer
Contributed by
rowzipops
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Saturday, 16th October 2010 @ 08:23:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Fearful nights and insane thrills,
Pop the cherry, pop the pills.
Fill your lungs with clouds of smoke,
Searching for the antidote,
Laugh until you feel the ache,
How much can your body take?
Share your words and share your kiss,
Aiming for a hit and miss,
Drink until their faces blur,
Get enough, then ask for more.
Hide in darkness, feel the heat,
Share the lust, become complete.
Have it all or walk away,
Summertime is time to play.
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Re: Summer
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th October 2010 @ 05:08:21 AM AEST
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Very vivid and fast-paced, good work.
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Re: Summer
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by thejack on
Tuesday, 19th October 2010 @ 05:29:28 PM AEST
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Interesting.
A little bit on the wild side for me. |
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