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Attraction
Contributed by
brialuv
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Sunday, 17th October 2010 @ 04:00:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When our eyes meet
Only we can see, only we can feel
The intensity it brings
The sudden urge
To stare sultry, deeply, intently
Trapped in one single gaze
Hormones fighting with one another to stay hidden
But wanting to burst out freely in the open for everybody to see
Trying to gain composure
Feeling butterflies inside
But then at the blink of an eye the gaze is broken
And now your all thats on my mind.
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brialuv
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2010-10-17 16:00:28]
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Re: Attraction
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 01:05:20 PM AEST
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I've never watched Twilight, but then again I don't feel I need to.
Eyes are tremendously expressive and can give away so much about how someone is feeling.
Nice work.
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