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Why?
Contributed by
cutey
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Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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why is it so hard to keep things going from so very far away what has happen
to what we have felt from the being it was all that and so very much more with butterfly's in our stomach our hand's would sweat or hearts would beat like a
race car our mind's think a like a soul's say same thing our brains gives the
same thing why being away is so hard to keep things together and going on
why does it hurt to be that far away why please why let me know what I'm
doing wrong why does it seem like i find a good thing in my life it end's up
being such a mess and a lot of things going on hurt for words are said and
a lot of pain comes from all that why can't being that far make us happy
and no sad oh be at each other for some thing that was said wrong what
can one do to show the other they love them why does it seem so hard
for any one to show each other that in there life it don't seem all that hard
to me and sure don't take much time either
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Re: Why?
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by Sara on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 08:51:36 PM AEST
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cool poem! I enjoyed the way you typed it up. I'm not sure if it was intentional or not, but it was great nonetheless... Awesome job!
<3 Sara |
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Re: Why?
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 03:21:17 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem! you have a good talent! |
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