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Darkening My Door
Contributed by
Bexstasy
on
Monday, 18th October 2010 @ 05:32:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I'll never let you,
Darken my door again,
I gave you a chance,
But you inflicted pain,
And you found it so easy,
It drove me insane,
The anger was too much,
For me to contain,
Every lie you told me,
Flooded my brain,
Like an open wound,
In the pouring rain,
So much hurt,
Like you'd attached a chain,
To my heart and,
Ripped it from my veins,
So leave me be,
You can't explain,
And don't come,
Darkening my door again.
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Bexstasy
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2010-10-18 17:32:41]
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Re: Darkening My Door
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by ek_da_poet on
Tuesday, 19th October 2010 @ 12:05:39 AM AEST
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| such a short but sad peace. it doesnt take hundreds of words to describe how you feel. simple and to the point "darkening my door". excelllent job my friend. i hope to see more from you! |
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Re: Darkening My Door
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by chrisdavid on
Tuesday, 19th October 2010 @ 07:02:52 AM AEST
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Wow! What a great piece. You've managed to rhyme 'again' with eight other words and still make your point well. A great write.
Take care, Chris. |
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