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The Old You
Contributed by
krezrazor
on
Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 02:14:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i sit alone in the conner and weep,
ive gone days without any sleep,
The pain you caused me,
wont go away,
i think about it everyday,
i know i still love you,
but i try so very hard,
to be careful with my heart,
i wont be fooled by you again,
so hurry up and explain,
why you would want to cause such pain...
ill give you sometime,
to revise, everything you've done,
and hopefully soon, you'll be back to the old you.
Copyright ©
krezrazor
... [
2010-10-20 02:14:11]
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Re: The Old You
(User Rating: 1 )
by Zeberdee on
Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 03:33:30 AM AEST
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The poem doesnt go into any depth to describe the obivous problems at hand, instead the poem belches out this rather uninteresting and unsophisticated story of someone who has been left by a loved one, ultimately leading to a rather pathetic and dull message.
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Re: The Old You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st October 2010 @ 01:26:25 AM AEST
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| i disagree with the above comment but like everything everyone is entitled to an opinion i think that this comes straight from the heart and you can feel the pain |
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