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If
Contributed by
voyage
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Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 12:03:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'll do and I would Will make it if I could For us and sake of love But otherwise I wouldn't.
Let go, I let go too Abandon, I will follow For white flags taken down All that we are wouldn't drown.
Please tell me you'll be here For me when I need shield I give you all I got now If unreturned we bow out.
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2010-10-20 12:03:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: If
(User Rating: 1 ) by Anbarean on
Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 11:35:41 PM AEST (User
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Its short and a lovely one...Very nice...keep it up |
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Re: If
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st October 2010 @ 01:23:31 AM AEST (User
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short sweet and perfect keep up the good work |
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