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Defeat
Contributed by
chibi13
on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 12:28:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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people lie
people cheat
people harm
people defeat
but he does all these things to me
my heart lay shattered in his hand
but he wont admit it; like a man
he says he loves me
but i know better
he says he willl be there for me forever and ever
i smile to push it away
but fall at theend of the day
this drama is tearing me apart
but its to late to even start.
to start to piece me back together
as i believe their lies
and not seeing that he is truthful in his eyes
and not seeing their despise.
he spoke from his heart; but i didnt believe him.
now i can only greive;
how i let my true love leave.
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2010-10-23 12:28:57]
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Re: Defeat
(User Rating: 1 )
by RowenM on
Saturday, 23rd October 2010 @ 02:25:12 PM AEST
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The twist at the end proved to be just enough!
It's a really good poem! |
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