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Your Love
Contributed by
po-it
on
Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 08:03:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Your love wont let me be
Wont let me see
Your love . it feels like destiny
Your love is that tenth symphony
Your love wont let me live
Wont let me take, wont let me give
Your love just wont let up
And Im just so fed up
Your love is just so worth knowing
Your love is what keeps me going
Your love is why I fall apart, your love is why ifeel complete
Your love is battle, mind and heart, fighting, and mind just cant compete
Your love just makes no freaking sense
Your love is simply too intense
Your live is like an autumn breeze
Your love is kids at chucky cheese
Your love is hell
Your love is Joseph in the well
Your love at times ruins my mood
Your love is rude
It barges in, it interrupts
Your love just drives me freaking nuts
Your love is that struggle within
Your love has warn my patience thin
Your love is joy
It makes this man feel like a boy
your love is food your love is air
your love is why I dare to dare
your love is I walk away, your love is why I fight
your love is day, your love is night
your love is why I write
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2010-10-27 08:03:04]
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Re: Your Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 09:01:51 AM AEST
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| you have an amazing piece there please keep up the good work :) |
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Re: Your Love
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by potentialpoet96 on
Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 12:29:26 PM AEST
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| this was great.. keep it up (: |
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Re: Your Love
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by RowenM on
Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 05:49:58 PM AEST
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The rhyme is awesome.
The message is clearly expressed.
I loved the vernacular lines lik e "freaking nuts"
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Re: Your Love
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by jcline5 on
Thursday, 28th October 2010 @ 07:59:29 AM AEST
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| i know this feeling so very well i am going through it as well try to read some of my stuff and you can see how i deal jcline5 |
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