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The one I love, loves the one I hate
Contributed by
NewGuy
on
Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 10:44:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Never before have I raised my hand Even to my foe Yet evil rears up at me And courage must I show
The one I love loves the one I hate This bars me from action swift To rid her from the worlds sight For all would be a gift
The laws of man says to hurt not But the damage received is great Payment in return issued Bringing forth due fate
My duty is to protect the ones Who cannot fight their own They know not what they face And shouldnt face it alone
I fear the worst every time When I must let him go Having no choice or say Taken by my foe
Ever worse with every day She proves she is worth not Any act to benefit my precious boy She refuses to take her spot
Unfit in every way You can stretch your mind Undeserving air to breath No reason can I find
By bringing darkness to her eyes Brings light to his days To have a loving future Without her evil ways
No more shall she harm him No more will I be stand I love that boy and will protect With power in my hand
No act too great and all excused What needs to will be done I will do anything Just to protect my son
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Re: The one I love, loves the one I hate
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th October 2010 @ 12:29:10 AM AEST (User
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i feel the same towards my daughters father, keep smiling one day your child will be old enough to understand and see the truth. well written thank you for sharing :) |
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Re: The one I love, loves the one I hate
(User Rating: 1 ) by scottstone on
Thursday, 28th October 2010 @ 04:57:25 AM AEST (User
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very personal |
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Re: The one I love, loves the one I hate
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lyre on
Friday, 29th October 2010 @ 02:28:59 AM AEST (User
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Nice poem! I've got commodious lessons! |
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Re: The one I love, loves the one I hate
(User Rating: 1 ) by deusdeira on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 04:08:54 PM AEST (User
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i have known a few people like this. I am sorry that she is a part of your life and you have to deal with her. It is never fun. |
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