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Bullets Over Bliss
Contributed by
duff
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Thursday, 28th October 2010 @ 09:28:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Even in dreams lies cool the sun
An arsenal of ice biting beneath the moon
Sinful vibrations falter in lost cadence
Porcelain coffee massacred the frame
Sheets buttered with dust
My stars couldnt dial the dark
Empty chambers saluting silver
Sights adjusted by foreign hands
Rounds of constant shelling
Surrender waves behind the fog
I was clear before the smoke
Now let me breathe
Copyright ©
duff
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2010-10-28 21:28:00]
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Re: Bullets Over Bliss
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by jcline5 on
Friday, 29th October 2010 @ 12:30:28 AM AEST
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| wow i cant even describe after reading this my feelings very good work |
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Re: Bullets Over Bliss
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 29th October 2010 @ 02:57:54 AM AEST
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| Wow! What a fantastic write! this is wonderfully thought out and beautifully executed. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Bullets Over Bliss
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by UNORTHODOX on
Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 05:56:14 AM AEST
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After reading this passage several times
my subconscience was able to sort the depth which is
this piece is disarming from the laymen 's view point
but when grasped, how truly wonderful understanding is
undoubtedly a fine write
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: Bullets Over Bliss
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st November 2010 @ 12:09:26 PM AEST
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Mystic, magical write.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Bullets Over Bliss
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2010 @ 06:56:13 AM AEST
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| Bravo this is exceptional, creativity,originality and above all else carrying me through every emotion until I breathe a heavy sigh. |
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Re: Bullets Over Bliss
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by Lyre on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2010 @ 09:12:02 PM AEST
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| I enjoy reading this! a GREAT WORK! |
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