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Moving on
Contributed by
kerissasmith
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Friday, 29th October 2010 @ 02:16:49 AM in AEST
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im aching inside,
like somone just stabbed me with a knife,
how could you do this to me?
i made a mistake,
and this is how i pay,
with days of silence, threatening and violence.
you dont understand, what i said was a mistake,
i was going to tell you. its the truth,
but someone beat me to it.
this time im not going to be the one to say sorry,
you caused me to much pain for my tiny mistake,
you point out all my flaws. im not perfect. no one is,
you've got to understand this.
You caused the volcano in me to errupt and now you have to clean the mess up,
So have fun, while im moving on...
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2010-10-29 02:16:49]
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Re: Moving on
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by Loveligirl92 on
Friday, 29th October 2010 @ 02:28:56 AM AEST
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| I really like this poem, be strong :-) |
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Re: Moving on
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by RowenM on
Friday, 29th October 2010 @ 12:37:20 PM AEST
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It's of wise ones to accept our mistakes.
I respect you for that.
Having that said, when there's nothing more to do, the answer is to move on.
Really good work! |
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Re: Moving on
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 29th October 2010 @ 04:59:15 PM AEST
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One line rings in my head above all others in this , and that is simply
Im not perfect, nobody is.
How true that statement is, we all make mistakes.
Steve |
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