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WHAT GIVES
Contributed by
emystar
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Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 07:47:24 AM in AEST
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He worked 12 hours a day
to raise your precious son.
He gave you his heart an soul.
You played around and cheated, hon.
What gives you the right to think
He should give you another chance?
He's moving on his heart to mend.
Go on with your sneaky cheating dance.
Your little man knows no other dad.
In another Country you're cheating, wild.
He begged, pleaded for your love
He's moving on you selfish child.
His love and dedication so true.
He wasn't good enough for you.
You spread ed your body here and there.
You want him back, yeah you do.
.
It's plain your selfish and unkind.
You don't deserve his unselfish love.
Just leave him alone now, dear.
He's as free as the stars shine above.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2010-10-31 07:47:24]
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Re: WHAT GIVES
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 12:30:07 PM AEST
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I've never understood why some people like to play these kinds of games.
Nevertheless, you've captured the essence of the situation here for us all to see.
Another wonderful write.
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Re: WHAT GIVES
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by duff on
Monday, 1st November 2010 @ 12:04:26 PM AEST
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It always baffles me when someone can do such things to a person who cares so much for your well being. You hope one day they will see what they are doing but thats about all you can do. There was a nice flow to this and well written.
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Re: WHAT GIVES
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by UAnwar on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 09:45:58 PM AEST
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Very emotional, i feel bad.
Apart from that i love the rhyme structure, great work :) |
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