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Brotherly Love
Contributed by
jhuds
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Monday, 1st November 2010 @ 12:59:49 PM in AEST
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Always the wrong decision,
continually boasting, full of pride,
you never see your wrongs,
for some reason I'm still at your side.
Your heading down a lethal path,
with blinders securely fastened,
the end is drawing near,
repercussions bound to happen,
worry now consumes me,
my stomach sickly twisting,
the solution has been provided,
why aren't you listening,
I can't help anymore,
patience has been depleted,
This is no longer high school,
my will surely defeated,
so take responsibility now,
before it is too late,
step up and be a man,
never again to hate!
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jhuds
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2010-11-01 12:59:49]
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Re: Brotherly Love
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by duff on
Thursday, 4th November 2010 @ 04:27:46 PM AEST
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You can feel the passion and concern through your words. A feeling of being helpless and knowing no matter what you say doesn't work. This was very well written.
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