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PARADISE
Contributed by
chrisdavid
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2010 @ 01:44:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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We are told
We won't be alone
In a place called heaven
Our spiritual home
We're told forever
That we'll be at peace
We will feel no pain
When from this earth we are deceased
And we really don't need to know
The way it all will end
Or the somewhere that we will go
Paradise
Is a place that we will trust
A place that is a must
For when we close our eyes
We'll go to paradise
A strong light
Will be the sign
That we have passed away
We have served our time
Our bodies remain
But our soul drifts away
High above those clouds
To never see another day
And we'll watch them cry the tears
Of all our memories
From our living years
Paradise
Is a place we're destined to be
A place for you and me
For when the angel flies
We'll be in paradise...
Paradise
There's no golden rule
For God accepts us all
When everybody dies
We go to paradise
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Re: PARADISE
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2010 @ 02:47:48 AM AEST
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| This is very well written on a subject clearly dear to you. I must say this poem is very strong in content and it has certainly got me thinking. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: PARADISE
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by pinkunicornoctober on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2010 @ 07:00:00 AM AEST
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| This is so COMFORTING! You did a GREAT job keeping it optimistic! You're a really good writer! |
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Re: PARADISE
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by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2010 @ 08:45:28 AM AEST
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| one ticket one way to paradise please lol |
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Re: PARADISE
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2010 @ 03:05:33 PM AEST
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An awesome write, friend.
It's a big subject but I think you covered it all.
Not many have the understanding that you do on the subject.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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