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A New Friend
Contributed by
julesxo
on
Friday, 5th November 2010 @ 12:33:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I found a broken wrist-watch
Flying in the gale
I put it in my pocket
With the penny and the snail.
When I brought it home
I threw it in the den
I was pretty certain
Id never see that watch again.
I was home a few weeks later
And my other clock had broke
I was in a sorry state
When I felt a painful poke.
I looked down in surprise and saw
My watchs eager face
Which, to my surprise, was ticking
At an even pace.
And, to this day, its still ticking
Right where my old clock used to be
Im so very glad I found it
And brought it home with me.
Copyright ©
julesxo
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2010-11-05 12:33:17]
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Re: A New Friend
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 5th November 2010 @ 03:06:01 PM AEST
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This has a really quirky feel to it.
Like it a lot.One of those poems that gives you a warm feeling inside.
Well done.
Steve |
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Re: A New Friend
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by emystar on
Friday, 5th November 2010 @ 03:36:22 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
It's a really good write.
Blessings,
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Re: A New Friend
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by ammar on
Saturday, 6th November 2010 @ 09:35:55 AM AEST
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I really like the rhymes and the smooth flow to it.
Good job. |
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Re: A New Friend
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by hanasuru on
Saturday, 6th November 2010 @ 08:57:46 PM AEST
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:) This made me smile.
I've always liked simple poems with good flow and an easy rhyme scheme. |
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Re: A New Friend
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by 2bpositive on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 01:56:39 AM AEST
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hi julesxo
and let me say
you're too modest
in everyway
your poem did I just read
and the first one you say
but your poem is so nicely done
i'm almost inclined to say--
No WAY!
a really nice and balanced piece.
looking forward to reading more.
2bpositive
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