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Darkness
Contributed by
Cryptiss
on
Sunday, 7th November 2010 @ 01:15:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkness
I watch you through the darkness
but all I see is blue
Watching through the darkness
as the darkness devours you
I walk into the darkness
trying to break through
The Past souls they meet me
as I come to you
I hear screaming
in the distance
pain is ripping through
Wont let it scum
Me
as I succumb to you.
My obsession brings me closer
with every step I take
The haunting music guides me
as day begins to break
I hear nothing
but the voices
as journey deep in to you
the darkness lights my way
but I cannot break through.
Blended
are the memories
of what i once knew
Shinning through the nightfall
the tears will not subdue
Screaming
for a release
of my obsession bathed in you
try as I might
these memories just wont do
walking through the
graveyard
morning all I knew
watching through the
darkness
waiting here for you
Copyright ©
Cryptiss
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2010-11-07 13:15:32]
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Re: Darkness
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by emystar on
Sunday, 7th November 2010 @ 02:09:26 PM AEST
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Sad but good writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Darkness
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by trackiller2006 on
Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 04:07:16 PM AEST
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| Very nice! "the darkness lights my way" is my favorite line. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Darkness
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by keela12 on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 08:31:18 AM AEST
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| very good writing you no how to create imagery in the readers mind excellent |
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