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Blueprint
Contributed by
windowguy
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Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 09:42:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Indelible plan
Carefully concealed inside
All living beings.
Copyright ©
windowguy
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2010-11-08 09:42:05]
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Re: Blueprint
(User Rating: 1 )
by 2bpositive on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 09:08:07 PM AEST
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Hi windowguy
don't be shy
I relate to your words
and I'll tell you why
your writing reminds me of G-d's
secret plan for his creations-
and only for their betterment.
If I had to do a first cousin piece to what you wrote it would probably go like this.
That's masterplan
I'm a fan
secretly hidden
inside Man
I really liked your write
For those of us that call ourselves deep
we do see that "light'
keep writing! |
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Re: Blueprint
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by UAnwar on
Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 08:20:32 AM AEST
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I love this haiku!
Very close to my own feelings towards nature inparticular.
Thank You |
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