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Your Breathing
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 07:15:05 PM in AEST
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Deep breaths turn me on;
exhales release desire.
inhaling you now
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2010-11-08 19:15:05]
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Re: Your Breathing
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by duff on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 10:36:36 AM AEST
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Wow. Those few lines got the heart racing. Well done.
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Re: Your Breathing
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by 2bpositive on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 11:41:53 PM AEST
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capturing the moment as the moment is being caught. Great imagery!
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