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Colorless Eyes
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 07:28:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Colorless eyes
Fold sky
Adore the promises
Of moonlight
Opening the door
At dismal hour
With dismal thought
To love
Left to conclaves
Of roses
Lilies
Wroth with envy
Hands burdened
With dreams and
Ideals
Too nave
To be true
Spoken at the brink
Of tears
Thoughts of horses
Running wild
At the memory
Of earlier tears
Yellow in distant
Fields
Blood and stars
Opening at the moonlight
Promises of sky
Fingers dance with orchids
Dance the thoughts
Of love
Away
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2010-11-09 19:28:29]
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Re: Colorless Eyes
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by duff on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 10:49:35 PM AEST
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What a beautiful piece of writing. Your imagery is stunning and captivates. There are some great lines here.
Opening at the moonlight
Promises of sky
Awesome line!
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Re: Colorless Eyes
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 11:41:42 PM AEST
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Hi there Abe,
It's always a delight to see something new from you.
Very creative write.
big huggs, smiles,blessings,
emy |
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Re: Colorless Eyes
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 01:56:49 AM AEST
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Oh my! what a truly captivating piece of poetry.
Full of atmosphere and highly descriptive. I love this one. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Colorless Eyes
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by Meddy45 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 05:41:59 AM AEST
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| Great poem I really enjoyed it |
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Re: Colorless Eyes
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by petulinka on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 04:13:55 PM AEST
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| nice like it a lot! |
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Re: Colorless Eyes
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by ming on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 09:16:10 AM AEST
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When you play you open the door. :) And this line speaks volumes!
'Hands burdened
With dreams and
Ideals
Too naïve
To be true'
ming |
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Re: Colorless Eyes
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 08:44:20 AM AEST
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| Wow like this write liked the way you used the words the write came out just right nice really nice keep writing. |
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Re: Colorless Eyes
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by Smithery on
Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 08:30:54 AM AEST
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life is my canvas, pain is my brush, love is my colour, you are my light.
Thanks for sharing, a beautiful poem |
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