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i don't know what category
Contributed by
clarinetguy123
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 08:55:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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what is love without a heart
it is no longer sweet now it is tart
when you're in love you are in space
your soul soars when you see your partners face
love cannot die
even when the end is nigh
so cherish the love you have now
and live it the only way how
love your partner until the end
and your life alone shall you not spend
for you will always have someone by your side
even if you feel you must hide
for the threat of the world is too great
and takes life at a set rate
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2010-11-09 20:55:19]
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Re: i don't know what category
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 05:18:04 AM AEST
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| Poetic and also true. |
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Re: i don't know what category
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by 2bpositive on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 11:24:45 AM AEST
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I like your pace
it's with good space
and the concept fortells
potential wedding bells!
so forget the rate
even without it, it's great
but take my cue, and
a thumbs up to you! |
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