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grrrrrrrrr
Contributed by
deusdeira
on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 09:18:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Today is the day
I throw love away,
I throw away fire,
of disastrous desire.
You never loved me,
You only love you,
And I will not wait,
For one so untrue.
You tell me Im weak,
Even though I feel strong,
I never felt bad,
Until you came along.
So take all my love,
To throw in the fire,
I dont want you,
Because you are a liar.
So go find a man,
To buy you some shoes,
Because I rue the day,
That I ever met you.
Copyright ©
deusdeira
... [
2010-11-09 21:18:06]
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Re: grrrrrrrrr
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by duff on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 10:53:35 PM AEST
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Wow. There are plenty of daggers being thrown in this piece and it makes you feel the anger. There is a nice flow to it and it's well written.
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Re: grrrrrrrrr
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by sporty on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 11:22:30 PM AEST
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| good piece....very mad.
just need a title.
the title sounds lame and like your not actually mad at all. |
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