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One Night Stands
Contributed by
duff
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Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 10:39:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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It begins here
wings meet horns
spirits perish
the lights are on
intentions are dim
lust tendered by glass
talons creep spines
eyes turned on
borrow a soul for shots
and the deal is done
vanishing under the bright exit
sheets await strangers as morning
prepares to unmask evenings face
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2010-11-09 22:39:22]
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Re: One Night Stands
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by 2bpositive on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 01:11:00 AM AEST
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duff, another good one. Picture the timing,
sense the light, the moment you capture and touch the height.
Keep writing, looking forward! |
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Re: One Night Stands
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 01:54:24 AM AEST
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Hi Duff
this is another wonderful write. Very atmospheric and free flowing. I love it. Keep the good work coming. |
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Re: One Night Stands
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by RowenM on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 03:28:43 PM AEST
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| It's tenderly described as not to reveal everything intentionally, but still giving us the readers the perfect hints! ;) |
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Re: One Night Stands
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 06:24:33 AM AEST
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"intentions are dim
lust tendered by glass"
I like it : ) |
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Re: One Night Stands
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by keela12 on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 09:32:27 AM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: One Night Stands
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by huwbeauty on
Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 03:19:42 AM AEST
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| I've read a few of your poems now.they're very good.you seem to be able to transport me and then leave me thinking. |
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