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Deception
Contributed by
gery_giggles
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Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The haunting feeling that rests in my head,
turns the wheels in the opposite direction.
Then i remembered,
the reason why i did not wish to wake.
In five seconds or less,
my world came to an end
then i suddenly lost the reason to live.
Goals,dreams,love and pride,
all fall to the ground,
in a single tear.
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2003-04-21 00:05:00]
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Re: Deception
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 04:34:38 PM AEST
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This is a good poem. I can really relate with it. For I also have and unloving father. I have written a poem about it called "Why Doesn't He Love Me?" You can check it out if you want to, you might like it. I enjoyed reading this poem.
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