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Colourful pain goes empty
Contributed by
petulinka
on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 04:32:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Bloody red
is spilling around
like a stain on the earth
Its getting further and further on and unexpectedly it hits the eyes of viewer standing in the void far away
The fresh green grass
absorbs his body without asking
and the hope hidden deep inside can not be masking anymore
A white bird
is growing up away from his shelter
erasing the evidence that hes ever been there.
Viewer is standing on the burned ground, feeling like to never make any other effort ever again.
And a blue calm ocean
is pouring down his face
like a morning kiss in the afternoon.
All around the atmosphere of dusty smothering mixture is inhalating in his lungs.
He sits there,
head in hands
howling with the pain he cant bear anymore.
All fears appearing so sudden leaving his throat so sore.
How could this happen in the first place?
He gets calmer,
breathes in,
breathes out,
breathes in
breathes out.
Pale eyes are staring to the nothingness of being.
Its like he wanted to say something,
then words loose their meanings on the way.
No white birds,
no green grass
just a red carpet of grief.
All pleasures gone, so quick
Looking around doesnt mean anything,
trying to move will come in vain.
Maybe
one day he finds his salvation,
maybe
one night, he wont be scared anymore.
But for now, and many steps hes supposed to take theres no relief,
hes lost in black and white world
full of pretended
promises.
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petulinka
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2010-11-11 16:32:18]
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Re: Colourful pain goes empty
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 05:24:36 PM AEST
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Woooowww this is a very powerf7ul write even tho it's sad.
Awesome work.
blessings,
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