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Requiem for nevercoming pain
Contributed by
petulinka
on
Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 02:50:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Dark tunnel around
and wild wind in ones hair
Too fast to keep the pace, its all around
the atmosphere of betrayal
by the loving and devoted
Scared
and
sacred
mean the same
tears falling down the face
their flash is the only thing one can perceive
so faultless
leaving no trace
like morning kiss
going along the cheek
the chin
the neck
and disappears
Pitiful colors moving with the speed like they meant to tell the secret
About love? hate? Or pain?
One sees the sorrow
the futility in the front
behind
and then far and further in the hearts bleeding
Is it too late to forgive
Ones begging for forgiveness
looking around and finds
that world hasnt S T O P P E D
as expected
but one has
One breathes with hearing himself screaming
tearing his chest
his remains
everything hed known before
You can suppress the pain
the broken-heart
but eventually it will reveal itself least expected
and in the end
you have to deal with it
fight till the E N D
Though it rip you to pieces
you must face the truth
the evidently hidden
You cry your heart dying
but still you tried
once
and
forever
One is staring at you closer than pleasant
and you just shall release the beast inside
the hidden skeletons
and break your heart once over again.
Ive L O V E D him
but somewhere on the way he stopped
It really did torn my heart
I can still see its P I E C E S on the ground,
theyre rolling there
like used
and
forgotten
Nobody can ever picked them
and make the picture complete
Maybe
one day
Ill look down
and find out they lost their juice
their deal of pain
but still I will always know that I can never have the jigsaw done
this one and lonely piece of grief will tell the story evermore
kept deep in my heart
too deep to know
W H Y
there is always something wrong when you get up
something doesnt seem right
the truth has been changed but
what is it that cant let me sleep?
One day I might recollect
but will this day E V E R come?
Copyright ©
petulinka
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2010-11-12 14:50:32]
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Re: Requiem for nevercoming pain
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 03:46:25 PM AEST
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| again i like how your wrote this. losing someone can be painful but there is always a brighter day ahead |
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Re: Requiem for nevercoming pain
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by emystar on
Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 03:48:17 PM AEST
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I agree with the other comment.
Very sad but awesome writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Requiem for nevercoming pain
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by duff on
Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 10:14:51 AM AEST
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I really like the style of this and the way it's written. There are some really good lines and you can feel the emotion oozing from each and every word. Well done.
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Re: Requiem for nevercoming pain
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by potentialpoet96 on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 10:18:44 AM AEST
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| nice write. |
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