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Stoned honey
Contributed by
Myd
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Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 12:08:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Ive kept vivid memories of him
The innocent love in those fragile days
Simple and intense
Feelings that I sensed
Feelings that we shared
Every time we stared
In each others love, despair
Our encounters were few
Nor did we knew
That time and space
May circumstances were placed
Would make the history repeat
The sight of you would make my heart beat
My blood slowed and freezes
Yours fastened and boiled
Skin craved for a touch
Hearts longed for too much
Chocolate eyes melted in the icy sky
Fluid clouds danced very shy
First we didnt want to accept
The feelings that connect
Excuses were said
Until our bodys met
Driven by the senses, unconsciousness clenches
The body, an unwilling,
We touch
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Myd
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2010-11-15 12:08:13]
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Re: Stoned honey
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by emystar on
Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 03:43:26 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Good work.
Keep writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Stoned honey
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by jamesatteb on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 10:11:44 AM AEST
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very nice flow and usage of words that evoke images in the mind of what could be.
very good !! :-) |
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