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Someday
Contributed by
jamesatteb
on
Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 04:30:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Someday
how can you love someone
so deeply and so completely
and it not be returned?
how can you miss someone so badly
it hurts you to your core
and it not be felt by the other?
how can you be so taken over
by someone and they not feel you?
how many times do you have to say
'I love you' before they finally get it?
how can love be so bright in ones eyes
and yet be only a shadow to someone else?
open your eyes i'm right here
wanting to give you the world
and myself completely..
still i wait for you to see and feel
the things that i do
maybe someday .....
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2010-11-15 16:30:15]
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Re: Someday
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 05:47:42 PM AEST
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| you can feel the longing and desire in this piece. very heart wrenching. very nice |
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