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Contributed by
jamesatteb
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Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 06:56:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As i sit,my eyes they wander
and then my mind begins to ponder..
i see the truth it sits right there
but nobody here does seem to care
a sounding board ,a whipping post
to me that seems to fit me most
the things i see they hurt me deep
but no ones there so i must creep
i sit in shadow where i belong
why no one cares just seems so wrong
i am here in front of you
but you dont care thats why i'm blue
i help you in your time of need
but you dont care its just your greed
i give my all to make you smile
to help you out i'd walk for miles
but in return i get the same
no love no time its all a game
my heart it hurts so deep inside
so i must hide my wounded pride
these words you read i write with pain
but you dont care,i cry in vain
so go ahead and use me as you will
i will never leave you,i love you still.....
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Re: untitled work
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by emystar on
Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 07:58:22 PM AEST
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Cry in vain, I kindda think that is the actual meaning of this write. Plus the fact that you still love her in spite of it all.
Good writing.
huggs, blessings,
emy
Ya know I think most folks can relate. |
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Re: untitled work
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by jcline5 on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 08:46:39 AM AEST
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i read this and i start to think i am not the only one who feels like this and neither are you my friend i dont understand the womans perspective of this and probably never will why must they see what we are and still deny us it litterally rips us apart inside i have something for her that she can never kill nor take away because i gave her my heart even if right now she will not accept it and for the title of the poem i think of my favorite song
your guardian angel by the red jumpsuit apparatus how about
'' PULL MY STRINGS JUST FOR A THRILL" |
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Re: untitled work
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by Anbarean on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 09:07:45 AM AEST
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wow these four last lines took my heart I am also on the same track and trail on which you are so I can understand your feelings. But you wrote it very very nice and emotional..
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Re: untitled work
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by Anbarean on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 09:11:01 AM AEST
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| You ask for a title...I must say ..." I Cry In Vain"...its just a suggestion.... |
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