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Love Is A Strong Feeling
Contributed by
Anbarean
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Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 10:01:14 PM in AEST
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Love is a strong feeling
That holds two close,
As close as a body and soul
It makes you strong to stand
Just like the water when hits an island
But can make you weak too
This can make you weep too
Love is like starlight to your eye
I wish this light remain forever
Never fade and never die ever
Copyright ©
Anbarean
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2010-11-19 22:01:14]
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Re: Love Is A Strong Feeling
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by shelby on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 11:00:11 PM AEST
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I really like this is short but so very sweet.
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Re: Love Is A Strong Feeling
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by Mila on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 02:29:07 AM AEST
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| such sweet write, love can really lift you up or bring you down!!! |
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Re: Love Is A Strong Feeling
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by duff on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 10:02:24 AM AEST
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I think it's great when a writer can deliver the message he or she is trying to convey in such a short passage. It can be difficult and not always work but it did here and it made for a really nice read. Well done.
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