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I Witness
Contributed by
NutMeg
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Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 01:28:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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You Think You're Beta than Her Because Your Taller? You Think You're Smarter then Her Because Your Older? But - You're Not. You Walk Around The Playground As If you Own It. But - You Don't. I notice - Your Alone. No Friends, Only Enemies. Oh Great, You Spotted Her By The Stairs, Hiding. Everyone Ignores You Both But I Can't Look away, My Friends Are Gossiping Behind me, But I Forget Them For A Second. She's Pushing Her Now. I Need To Help. Mum Says Don't Get Involved. She's Pushing Harder! I Need To Help! I Run, Hurry, Faster! The Stairs! Ouch! I Stop Dead In My Tracks. The Ambulance Have Been Called. I Could've Saved Her Broked Neck And Leg! Now Everyone Is Watching, Shocked. I'll never Live This Down. The Gulit Is Already Overpowering. I'm So Sorry.
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Re: I Witness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Anbarean on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 01:42:48 AM AEST (User
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I feel soo sorry and sad about this but as a poem well writen and well done and very nice..
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Re: I Witness
(User Rating: 1 ) by duff on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 05:29:36 PM AEST (User
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This is powerful and tragic. A sad poem but well written. |
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