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Serial Killer
Contributed by
duff
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Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 09:43:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Scalpel methodical man
Dirty blues in his brain
A dusty lamp swings
Murder and a radio's tune
Families favorites splayed
Stitched pleasure psychopath
Come and get him detective
Photographs black and white
Channel five plays his song
Blood bodies mind control
Proud dangerous wicked DNA
Follow catch shackle smart
Evil damned a killer cuts
The devils tambourine in his head
Copyright ©
duff
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2010-11-20 09:43:15]
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Re: Serial Killer
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by Anbarean on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 09:46:20 AM AEST
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a very different way of writing...I like the way you shape and wrap it up and make it well...
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Re: Serial Killer
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by xxPullMyStringsxx on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 06:37:34 PM AEST
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| I looove the last line, this poem is totally wicked! |
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Re: Serial Killer
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by emystar on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 06:41:01 PM AEST
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Well done. It sounds like my tv looks when I have to change channels.
Still it's great writing and nothing personal on your write.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Serial Killer
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st April 2011 @ 07:55:25 AM AEST
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| hmmm, dirty blues and the devil's tambourine...like it. the last line is really great. well done. |
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