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All I Want Is You.
Contributed by
Bexstasy
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Sunday, 21st November 2010 @ 01:15:53 PM in AEST
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I don't want to want this,
The way I know I do,
It's so difficult to admit,
That all I want is you,
You make me feel something,
Something I'm not sure I like,
You increase my vulnerability,
But somehow that's alright,
You make my true colours shine,
But I'm so scared to let them show,
I burble useless things,
Forgetting to even say "Hello",
You create butterflies in my stomach,
And make my heart skip a beat,
When you flash that smile at me,
Everything just feels complete,
When you walk into the room,
You're the only one I see,
I just wish I could tell you,
How great you and I would be.
Copyright ©
Bexstasy
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2010-11-21 13:15:53]
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Re: All I Want Is You.
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by xxPullMyStringsxx on
Sunday, 21st November 2010 @ 07:03:47 PM AEST
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I love the way this flows.
And I know how you feel, haha.
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Re: All I Want Is You.
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by duff on
Sunday, 21st November 2010 @ 10:38:59 PM AEST
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| A sweet and sensitive write of devotion to the one that makes us tick. Well written lines and I like the emotion. Well done. |
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Re: All I Want Is You.
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by Maygee on
Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 11:45:26 AM AEST
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| I love the flow of this poem and the way it's written :) You also portray your feelings really clearly and I enjoyed reading it. I also wish you luck =] |
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Re: All I Want Is You.
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by chrisdavid on
Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 12:33:02 PM AEST
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You wrote one like this a while back. Haven't you plucked up the courage yet?!!! If he's showing some signs of liking you, then give it a go. Although I know how you're feeling!
Take care, Chris.
ps If you do ask, let me know the outcome - good or bad...good luck! |
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Re: All I Want Is You.
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by bleedinheart on
Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 03:20:27 PM AEST
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| i hope every1 gets to feel this |
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Re: All I Want Is You.
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th November 2010 @ 12:21:27 AM AEST
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This poem is warm and fun, it makes me smile. Ahhh those feelings of love. Well you need to tell this person how you feel.
Lovely poem
Michelle |
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Re: All I Want Is You.
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by huwbeauty on
Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 03:14:08 AM AEST
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| unrequited love so sweet yet painful a lovely poem |
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