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Sand Dunes
Contributed by
nirupam
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Sunday, 21st November 2010 @ 08:14:44 PM in AEST
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Sand dunes alter their surfaces too soon,
Nothing remains beyond a while,
Winds keep working out miracles.
Why do you look forward to lengthiness?
Any length of time proves repetitive,
A moment independent still goes a long way.
Nothing remains beyond a while.
No thing remains beyond a while.
Sand dunes teach existential lessons.
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nirupam
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2010-11-21 20:14:44]
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Re: Sand Dunes
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by duff on
Sunday, 21st November 2010 @ 10:33:06 PM AEST
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| A write to sharpen the mind and to feast this is fantastic. There is something hypnotic about your words and it is enchanting, Great job. |
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Re: Sand Dunes
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 12:24:11 AM AEST
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| A nugget of wisdom expanded upon then neatly packaged in its own last line of summary |
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