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Places
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
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Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 03:45:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Places
There are places Ill never go, but Id love to
There are faces Ill never kiss, but I want to
Id love to go to Hawaii it looks cool in pictures and on TV
Id love to go but it is beyond my budget
I suppose Ill have to deal with what I cant have and thats what growing up is all about
Not having your dreams fulfilled, failure, rejection
If the places I never get to go dont have me there will the world be right?
But if I went would I upset the equilibrium, the fabric of time?
I want to go places, see new worlds, and kiss nice faces
But I know I wont and Ill just have to deal with that fact
I wish I was free to do what I wanted to do but Im never going to be free
Not until the end do we gain our freedom pass to the world and anything is possible in the next life
By banjosandwitch 21/11/10
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Re: Places
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 04:48:49 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this write. It has a great flow.
blessings,
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Re: Places
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by DrogedaRain on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 06:27:22 AM AEST
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| Just beautiful I love it. Looking forward to reding more of your works. =) Peace and Blessings... |
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