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My Dying Anthem.
Contributed by
resist77
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Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 12:00:36 PM in AEST
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And hope existed within my brain As they cut it out The children sing And out she comes Locked away for years Please don't cry There's nothing to fear Freedom is free The angels are here The devil was me But I've disappeared Hope, you see it at last Spreading delicate wings She brings Our brightest hopes and dreams Say goodbye to reality And welcome the serene My beautiful, I'm as dead as dead can be Now close your eyes Always in eachother's dreams.
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Re: My Dying Anthem.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Anbarean on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 12:14:28 PM AEST (User
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don't close your eyes...remain open because there is a tomorrow and there is a day brightness after a dark night...
Nice poem and well written..
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Re: My Dying Anthem.
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 11:42:50 PM AEST (User
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Well written but very sad.
I hope things are better for you soon.
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Re: My Dying Anthem.
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 25th November 2010 @ 01:09:06 AM AEST (User
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Freedom is free
The angels are here
Well done even in its sadness.
Blessings,
emy |
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